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18th-Jul-2007 10:52 pm

TITLE: Behind The Gray Eyes
LENGHT: Series [3/?]
AUTHOR: Dora[[info]sweetbait  ]
RATING: PG 13
PAIRINGS: Jaeho, Yoomin, Jaeki (eventual Jaeho)
GENRE: Romance, drama, angst, not sure yet
SUMMARY: Jaejoong makes yunho realize that there's something special between them Yunho's too stubborn to let his pride down and accept Jae.
OTHERS:

PREVIOUS: [CHAPTER 1] [CHAPTER 2]

Yunho rested his head on his palm and yawned. He blew his hair away from his eyes and looked at his watch. 4am. Oddly enough, Junsu and Yoochun both took their sleeping bags out to sleep in the living room. It's as if they knew something was going to happen.

Yunho almost fell asleep but was startled when the apartment door creaked open and Changmin's soft voice could be heard. Siting up straight and waited for Jaejoong. He could hear every word they were saying outside.....

"Jaejoong-ah, you should go rest. You've had a rough night. I'm going to take a shower. ok?" Yunho could hear the rare tone of stress in Changmin's voice.

"...wait, Changmin..don't tell Yunho what happened. I'm afraid he'll.." Yunho cringed at the thought of Jaejoong hiding something from him. Again.

"But Hyung, this is serious. We can't just hide it from Yu-

"Changmin! Just don't say anything, ok? At least not all of it. Take your shower. Go." The sound of footsteps occupied the apartment as Jaejoong pushed Changmin towards the washroom door. Jaejoong rubbed the sides of his head and entered the bedroom; he was shocked to find only Yunho sitting on his bed. Letter clutched in his hand, Yunho walked up to Jaejoong.

"Yunho, is something wrong?" Jaejoong stared into Yunho's eyes. He shivered at the unusual coldness he received.

"Do you think this is funny?" Yunho hissed.

"Wha-

"Do you think that making me wait 5 hours in an old, ugly Ramen shop is such a great April fools prank?" Yunho continued.

"Wait Yunho, I can explain-

"Oh yes, Jaejoong. You're going say that you were going to give me a love letter aren't you? huh?"

"So you know?"

"Of course I know, I overheard you and Changmin the other night," Yunho smirked," I can't believe that you didn't even write your own loveletter. You made Changmin write it just for an April fools prank? And to turn out you didn't even show up to humiliate me. Is this what you call fun?"

"No. Wait, Yunho, I was at the hospital.." Jaejoong's eyes turned glassy as Yunho refused to believe everything he says.

"Likely story, Kim Jae Joong, if so, tell me why. why? Why kim Jaejoong did you end up at the hospital?"

Jaejoong stuttered.

"I....I don't ...I don't know," lying wasn't exactly easy for an honest person like Jaejoong. Yunho rolled his eyes at the obvious lie.

"Exactly," blinded by anger, Yunho continued, "Jaejoong, you're pathetic." Yunho ripped the loveletter and threw it at Jaejoong.

The door suddenly burst opened revealing a tired looking Changmin clutching something in his hand.

"Jaejoong, here's your....." Changmin gasped at the sight he was greeted with. A furious Yunho who looked like he was going to murder someone and a shocked Jaejoong who had his hands over his mouth as he stared at a bunch of scattered paper around him.

The next few seconds went by so fast, it was only a blur for Changmin. Jaejoong bursted into tears and ran out of the apartment. Changmin decided not to run after him. If Jaejoong wanted to be alone, Changmin knew that there was nothing he could do to stop him. He whipped his head back and gave Yunho a death glare. Shrugging his shoulder, Yunho turned to leave for the bathroom but was met with Changmin's foot  blocking the door.

"What is it?"

"Jaejoong." Changmin stated.

"So what? He deserved it! You too! How could you even help him with such a stupid prank?! That pathetic loveletter. God, Changmin, I wanted to puke."

"Hold on. What are you talking about? What prank?"

"Stop pretending. I know everything already. Jaejoong made me wait 5 hours at a Ramen shop. He was going to give me a "loveletter". Turned out he was only doing it for an April fools prank." Yunho faked a laugh.

"Yunho. Did Jaejoong admit it was a prank?" Changmin raised an eyebrow.

"N-no. But it probably was. His excuse was that he couldn't come since he was at the hospital. Whatever. Things like this don't happen in real life. Who's he trying to kid. Changmin, don't go along with his prank anymore. That loveletter to me-

"Do you know what this is?" Changmin held up an envelope. He continued before giving yunho a chance to talk. "This is a loveletter. A loveletter I wrote. THE loveletter you probably overheard. The night before, jaejoong came to me to ask me to write a loveletter for Heechul to Donghae (*note: these are two totally gorgeous super junior members *starts fangirling and then runs back behind the computer*). Being Heechul's best friend, Jae Hyung knew that Heechul does not have a single cell of seriousness in him. He asked me to help him write it since I major in literature."

Yunho took a step back. But he didn't completely back off. "What about-

"Shut up and listen. The letter you ripped into shreds, took Jaejoong 5 evenings to write. He missed 4 meals and lost 3 pounds worrying over your reaction. He was walking to the flower shop to get you flowers but came across a few teenagers who were spraying graffiti on your poster outside 7-eleven. He got pissed and tried to get those teenagers away but they ended up slicing his left arm with pocket knives. Thus, the trip to the hospital."

"why didn't he tell me?" Yunho sunk against the wall and clutched his face in terror. After all the things he said to Jae...

"Jaejoong didn't want to tell you that the bunch of teenagers were spraying on only your face. He didn't want you to be upset over it. Now, as a leader, more so as his bestfriend, what gives you the right to hurt him the way you just did?"

Yunho face grew as white as the shredded loveletter laying peacefully on the ground. Jung Yunho had never felt this way in his life before. For the first time ever, he didn't know what to do.

"So Jaejoong... he li-likes me?"

"Yunho, you're the biggest idiot known to mankind." With that, Changmin left the room.

Yunho gathered the remaining pieces of Jaejoong's letter.

[CHAPTER 3 END]


BONUS: next chapter preview *plays themesong in the background*

Junki opened his front door, "Jaejoong?"
"Hyung, can I stay here tonight?

"Jaejoong-ah.. I'm sorry" Yunho stared at his shoes afriad to meet Jae's face.

"Yoochunnie! I'll make you strawberry cake!!"
"Sorry Min, I'm having lunch with Yuri today"


This chapter was really long for me. I hope you enjoyed it. Tell me what you think ^^
Comments 
18th-Jul-2007 04:15 pm (UTC)
omg. can i stab yunho? lol, no. but really, he's gotta be one of the most idiotic oblivious guys in the universe! (actually there are probably lots more who are MUCH worse than him ><) i love your story. i'm always waiting for a new chapter to come out!!! so update sooN! please! ^^

btw. the next chappie preview. could there be a little jaeki there? ooohhh~ XD heehee. and stupid yoochun. he might even be worse than yunho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
19th-Jul-2007 01:43 am (UTC)
Stab yunho? Jae would murder you before you even get your sword out. lmao

Hee,, Yunho is a complete idiot in my fic in terms of relationship

I'm glad you enjoyed it! there isn't much jaeki next chapter =( but there'll be ALOT in the future *wink wink*

thanks for reading!
18th-Jul-2007 04:23 pm (UTC)
Stupid Yunho makes me want to root for JaeKi. XD

Yunho'd have to grovel and beg and more. Hmph.

Thank you for the quick updates! More soon, please! ^_^
19th-Jul-2007 01:45 am (UTC)
lol. *starts handing out Jaeki signs* be expecting a lot of it in the near future ^^

I'll "TRY" to update everyday ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting!
18th-Jul-2007 04:31 pm (UTC)
Poor Jaejoong! Yunho was so mean to him!!! I hope he makes it up to Jae! And the preview sounds really good! Can't wait to read it!
19th-Jul-2007 01:47 am (UTC)
I was afraid that the preview would spoil the next chapter. but it seems to be well like, no?

Thanks for reading! I hope you will look forward to the next chapter ^^
18th-Jul-2007 05:46 pm (UTC)
OMG !!! yunho is so stupid !!! *smacks yunho's head*
and now Jae go to Junki's place ! what's you gonna do if Jae choose junki over you...
Update soon <333
19th-Jul-2007 03:39 pm (UTC)
ho hum ^^ What will out yunnie do if jae really does that? but then again.. *evil snickers* *goes insane* *gets shot*

Sorry, I'm extremely hyper today.

Thanks you for reading!! lol
18th-Jul-2007 06:15 pm (UTC)
Jaejoong should have told Yunho in the first place, he was a bit stupid to hide everything so I don't hate Yunho. But I want Yoomin more.
19th-Jul-2007 03:40 pm (UTC)
Lol Jae cares too much about yunho. So much that it harms himself. =(

I'll have more yoomin in future chapters ^^ in chapter 4, yoomin is in big trouble ^^

Thanks for reading!
18th-Jul-2007 06:44 pm (UTC)
whaa poor jae!! *glare at yunho* This is a really good fic and i like it! i really can;t wait for the next chapter causejunki coming and ooo micky going with yuri... poor minnie! but plz update soon!
19th-Jul-2007 03:42 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Though juni migh *hint hint* become a jaeho obstacle, he won't be hated. Everyone loves junki ^^
*points above* Thought I can't say the same about Yuri.

Thanks for readin!!
18th-Jul-2007 07:51 pm (UTC)
YUNHO!! for some reason... i could see all this happening. like it's in Yunho's character to be like that... when he's confused and doesn't want to admit it and take it out on others... but... i don't think that Jae is going to just pick Junki... he loves Yunho and just because he did that... Jae isn't going to forget about Yunho and choose Junki because he's nice... Yunho is nice too, he just... snapped. NOOO!!!! i can't have anyother pairing then the beautiful Jaeho!! poor Jae!! arm slashed and then that. don't do anything you know you'll regret Jae!!! like take the pain and try to forget it with Junki... you DON'T LOVE HIM!!! well... i really can't wait for more!!! XD you updated so fast! yay!
20th-Jul-2007 03:18 pm (UTC)
Thats how I imagine yunho too ^^ he's so stubborn and always does the wrong thing. Don't be so sure about Jae not picking junki *wink wink* I'm trying to to give out too much but then I ust want to say all of it *goes insane*

I'm glad you like th series. I was worried at first. Thanks very much for reading!!
18th-Jul-2007 11:07 pm (UTC)
OH MY GOD! As much as I adore and love Junki, the guy
but for goodness sake, why does he have to be the obstacle to Jaeho.
Teary eyes.

But then again, all the more interesting. Hehe. I'm so excited. :]
Thank you for writing.
20th-Jul-2007 03:19 pm (UTC)
Though Junki becomes a obstacle, I find it impossible to hate junki ^^ he's too nice. (and gorgeous too ^^)

Thanks for reading!!
18th-Jul-2007 11:54 pm (UTC)
AAAAH SO THAT'S WHAT IT WAS!!

Awww...but I feel sad for both of them, because Yunho misunderstood! *hugs them all*
20th-Jul-2007 03:23 pm (UTC)
Lol. Yup ^^ that's what it was. I didn't want to to be something like Jae forgetting yunho or anything life threatening >.< They're used so often it becomes a cliche =/

I feel sad for them too. Be prepared to feel more sad for them in the future. lol ;)

thanks for reading!
20th-Jul-2007 06:54 pm (UTC)
Oh noez, more sadness! 0.0
18th-Jul-2007 11:57 pm (UTC)
That was sorry to say short, but I can't wait for the next chapter! I know they seem so long when writing it but when it's posted it's sometimes short, I dislike that a lot! (happens to me)
20th-Jul-2007 03:25 pm (UTC)
I know exactly what you mean!! This chapter took me a bit more than an hour and when I posted it, it was like.... a page and a bit more! Its so frustrating!! *starts going insane*

I'm glad you like it ^^ Thanks for reading!
19th-Jul-2007 12:58 pm (UTC)
ACK... yunho U_U.. I criiiied!! >.< why'd he have to tore the letter so faaast *thwacks yunho* bad boy! he should write 204309872408734 loveletters in return before Jaejoong finaly says 'I forgive you ' XD ...painfull wrists :X

*squishes jaejae* oh the pain the author causes you *pouts* hehehe XD

<3333333
20th-Jul-2007 03:28 pm (UTC)
Lol. I should give ae a huge lollipop for making him go through so much. If you hate yunho right now? You'll hate him more the next few chapters. lmao. I should probably be handing out hammers to readers to whack yunho.

Thanks for reading and I hope you'll look forward to the next chapter ^^
19th-Jul-2007 01:27 pm (UTC)
new reader...

evil yunho... -______-
don't know what to say anymore... >____<

nice fic!!! <3 <3 <3
update soon!!!!
20th-Jul-2007 03:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks for taking your time to try my fic!! I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters as well ^^
20th-Jul-2007 02:33 am (UTC)
bad yunho!!!!! *bitch slaps yunho*

thats what you get for being such a bitch..

*hugs jae* huhuhuhu!! >____
20th-Jul-2007 03:31 pm (UTC)
I love your icon!! Yoochun's pout is godly *drool*

sorry that was totally random, I've turned hyper after drinking coffee (at 11:30 pm too >.<)

I think yunho received 50 slaps this chapter >.< He's really being an ass

Thanks for reading!!
20th-Jul-2007 04:00 pm (UTC)
hahah i knwo!!! he deserve a slap...well mines a bitch slap
LOL

since ur hyper... why not update...
20th-Jul-2007 04:19 pm (UTC)
Will do so right now ^^ just took a shower.
20th-Jul-2007 05:58 pm (UTC)
i cant wait!!! *hands you icecream*
20th-Jul-2007 04:50 am (UTC)
accck! love this chapter (despite the yunho stubbornness).

fwah.
so many emotions @___@
haha, great writing, never stop, okay? =DD
20th-Jul-2007 03:33 pm (UTC)
Aww thank you!! This means a lot for me. *gives you gigantic huggle*

Thank you for reading!! and don't worry, I won't stop in the middle of the series ^^
20th-Jul-2007 09:54 am (UTC)
OMG OMG OMG!!!!
*PUNCH & SLAP YUNHO REPEATEDLY!!!*

Poor Jae...
Gah, he'll stay the night in JunGi's house?
O my...
Yunnie, you gotta fix this fast!!! ^_____^

Waiting for the next chapter!!!
LOVE LOVE!!! ^__^
20th-Jul-2007 03:36 pm (UTC)
By the end of the next chapter, Yunho would probably ned to go to the hospital for being slapped too much. lmao

I hope you like it ^^ thanks for reading!!
14th-Aug-2007 03:11 am (UTC)
Ouch, you tell him Changmin!
21st-Aug-2007 03:21 pm (UTC)
GO MINNIE!! Minnie's like Jae's little angel >.<

Thanks for reading!
22nd-Aug-2007 09:34 pm (UTC)
lol. Yes he his.

Your welcome. please take time to read me, and comment. I'd be grateful. thanks.
19th-Aug-2007 10:14 pm (UTC)
it's a little weird... too much explaining all at once. but still, good job! i can see you already wrote a lot since you wrote this chapter, so i think the writing will just get better in the next chapters.
21st-Aug-2007 03:22 pm (UTC)
Well, I was extremely new to writing back then, so maybe it isn't that good. I've improved slightly now so it gets better ^^

Thanks for reading!
30th-Aug-2007 08:27 am (UTC)
awww, you're too modest! you improved a ton! (not that your writing wasn't great before! :D <3333)

and honestly, the most admirable thing is when someone actually gives the time and effort to write and update. d^_^b
22nd-Sep-2007 02:11 pm (UTC)
Oopsies, I've just noticed this comment since I was double checking if I left any comments out >.<

I'm not too confident about my english since it wasn't my first language when I was young. Even now, I doubt my own english.

Hehe, I try to update fast but seeing how school started, I feel guilty updating like..once a week >.<
2nd-Sep-2007 05:33 pm (UTC)
There's nothing like a good guilt moment for Yunho >:}

But I hope Changmin doesn't get in trouble for spilling everything. *changmin fangirl worries*

Come on Yunho, Jaejoong. Be manly in love!
22nd-Sep-2007 02:08 pm (UTC)
Well. Yunho deserved it. Ha lol

Changmin's fine, I find that this chapter makes Changmin looks a bit intimidating. >.<

Lol Yunho will catch up with Jaejoong ^^

Thanks for reading!
17th-Nov-2007 05:10 pm (UTC)
T_T poor jaejong. yunho, hurry go chase jaejong back or i smack u. haha juz kidding.

"Junsu and Yoochun both took their sleeping bags out to sleep in the living room"
haha i saw 2 big worms crawling on d floor haha
17th-Nov-2007 05:20 pm (UTC)
Yunho's probably immuned to smacking >.< lol

HAHA >.< 2 big worms. Now I'm imagining yoochun and junsu rolling around in their sleeping bags >.<

Thanks for reading!
18th-May-2009 06:17 pm (UTC)
stupid Yunho!

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