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17th-Jul-2007 09:35 pm

TITLE: Behind The Gray Eyes
LENGHT: Series [2/?]
AUTHOR: Dora[[info]sweetbait   ]
RATING: PG 13
PAIRINGS: Jaeho, Yoomin, Jaeki (eventual Jaeho)
GENRE: Romance, drama, angst, not sure yet
SUMMARY: Jaejoong makes yunho realize that there's something special between them Yunho's too stubborn to let his pride down and accept Jae.
OTHERS: This is my first fanfic so if I make any mistakes, please tell me ^^.

PREVIOUS: [CHAPTER 1]



"Minnie, are these yours?"

Changmin looked up from his ipod to see Yoochun dangling a pair of large, white, micky mouse boxers on his forefinger. Blushing, Changmin snatched the boxers and nodded a yes. suddenly noticing something, Changmin plucked out his headphones. He was about to speak before he was interrupted by Yoochun.

"Is that Girlfriend's (A music group) new music video?"

"Yeah, you like their songs?"

"Psh, no. I like their legs," said Micky before letting out a long whistle.

"Um sure, whatever," Changmin forced a smile. "Hey Yoochunnie!"

"Hmm," Yoochun kept his eyes on Changmin's ipod. Realizing that Yoochun didn't pay attention to Changmin's words, Changmin turned off his Ipod. He was greeted with a tiny pout from Yoochun.

"Yoochunnie, did you ever notice that our names kind of match each other?" Changmin widened his eyes when looking up at Yoochun.

"How?"

"Well, you always call me Minnie..and your stage name is "Micky" so its like we're a couple. Yoo know..Micky and Minnie.. It's what fans are saying," Changmin faked a laugh and paused to see Yoochun's reaction. He continued to test Yoochun, "Don't you think it's kind of cute?"

Yoochun took a seat beside Changmin and leaned forward towards him. He was so close that Changmin could tell the exact flavor of gum he was chewing.

"I think..... its the stupidest thing ever. Don't you think so Changmin? Let them have their fantasies. Its not like its ever going to happen anyways or if we're gay." Changmin's heart sank. Yoochun pointed to the poptart in Changmin's hand, "Mind if I take that?"

"No...go.-go ahead. I'm not hungry," Changmin forced a smile.

"Thanks." Yoochun winked before standing up to find Junsu, "DUCK BUTT!! Pay up! I told you I could get Changmin's poptart without him beating me up!"

Changming watched in silence as the tall slender figure disappeared into the bedroom. The only sound that could be heard was the Ipod hitting the cold marble floor.

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Jaejoong reread his letter. Tonight was going the be THE night. His relationship with Yunho will either shatter or blossom. He sealed the envelope and stuck a little heart sticker on it.

Biting his lip, Jaejoong wrote "To Yunho". He tucked letter into his drawer and padded into the kitchen to take a drink before picking up his phone to call Yunho.

"Yoboseyo?"
"Yunnie-ah, its Jaejoong"
"What's up?"
"Not much. Hey listen, can you meet me tonight at the Ramen shop near our apartment?"
"Sure why?"
"I have something really important to tell you."
"You alright?"
"I'm fine, just come tonight. I'll be there at 7:00 ok?
"Ok."
"Yunnie-ah, don't leave until I come."
"Jae, I need to go. It's my turn for the shoot. Boa just finished."
"OK, then see you to-

Yunho hung up. Jaejoong stuck his tongue out at the phone and dialed another number.

"Yoboseyo, Mable's Flowers, how may we help you?"

"Hi, I'd like to order a dozen of white roses for tonight. I'll pick them up at 6:30"

"Is that all sir?"

"Yes."

"That'll be $90. And you are... MR..."

"Mr. Kima Chuma Luma Duma."

"...."

"Bye"
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Yunho glared at the clock on the wall. He glared at his watch. He also glared at the five female waiters in front of him each holding out their notepad.

"Sir, are you waiting for someone?" mumbled one of the waiters.

"Yeah...and maybe I would see him if the five of you go away," Yunho hissed.

"Its a he-e..its a HEEEEE!" The 5 girls shrieked. "So you don't have a girlfriend?"

"No...." Yunho looked around for Jaejoong.

"Can I have your number? I'm not like your average crazy fan U-know. I love your music!!" *insert high pitched shriek*

"Go AWAY!"

"But Oppa......"

"You know what? I'm gay so leave me alone!"

The five girls left in a jiffy. There suddenly seemed to be a lot of tables that needed cleaning.

Yunho looked back at the clock. Midnight. Didn't Jaejoong say 7pm. It was Jaejoong who said this was very important. It was Jaejoong who told him not to leave today. Yunho looked at his watch and noticed a sudden flicker when the time reached 12:00. It was April 2nd. a sudden realization came to Yunho. Jaejoong made him wait 5 hours for a april fools trick? Yunho slapped his money onto the table and left the restaurant.

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"Yoboseyo?"

"Hello, is this Shim Changmin?"

"Speaking."

"This is St. Margaret Hospital. Kim Jaejoong was submitted 10 minutes ago and well need to come right away."
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Yunho was pissed. No, he was furious. Without knocking, Yunho stormed into the bedroom expecting Jaejoong but was greeted with an empty bedroom. He cursed under his breath and say on Jaejoong's bed waiting for Jaejoong to come back.  He looked around Jaejoong bed and couldn't take his eyes off the bedside table.

On it were 3 picture frames. A picture of Yunho and Jaejoong, and picture of his family, and one of the members of DBSK. Something caught yunho's eyes. a little corner of an envelope sticking out of the drawer. He pulled it out.

"To Yunho. From Jaejoong


[END CHAPTER 2]

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This chapter was really rushed XD. I had only an hour to do it so if there's any mistakes, please bare with me until I can proofread it.

BONUS:Jaejoong's Eyes



JAEHO BONUS:


Comments 
17th-Jul-2007 03:17 pm (UTC)
AAAAAHH!! What happened to Jaejoong?! Nuuuuu~

18th-Jul-2007 02:11 pm (UTC)
Don't worry. The injury isn't the main thing in the next chapter ^^

Thank you for reading!!
18th-Jul-2007 03:24 pm (UTC)
I see a guilt trip in Yunho's future, hehehe
18th-Jul-2007 04:23 pm (UTC)
You're right ^^ lol
17th-Jul-2007 04:37 pm (UTC)
noooooooooooooo!! Jaejoong!!! why?!!!
18th-Jul-2007 02:14 pm (UTC)
^.^ Ihope you'll enjoy the next part

Thank you for reading!
17th-Jul-2007 04:57 pm (UTC)
Omo~ what happened to JaeJoong?
kyaaaa....
update soon pliz!
18th-Jul-2007 02:50 pm (UTC)
*hands out popcorn* You'll be surprised to see what happened next chapter ^^

Thank you for reading!
17th-Jul-2007 05:27 pm (UTC)
Noooo !!!!! what's happen to jae ???
update soon ! <3
18th-Jul-2007 04:25 pm (UTC)
your wish is granted ^^ I'll try to update everyday ^^

Thanks for reading!
17th-Jul-2007 09:05 pm (UTC)
hmmmmm...is he gonna forget about yunho due to the accident??

waaaaaaaaaaHhhh! update soon~
18th-Jul-2007 04:25 pm (UTC)
Nah, I think that's a little overused so I decided not to do that.

Thanks for reading ^^
17th-Jul-2007 09:21 pm (UTC)
whooooooooooooooooa there jae~~
18th-Jul-2007 04:27 pm (UTC)
Lol. I hope you liked this chapter

Thank you for reading!
17th-Jul-2007 10:41 pm (UTC)
Nooo please don't stop. I am soooo interested.
Oh my god. Even though you rushed but this part was the cutest thing. Haha and I love the part with "Mr. Kima Chuma Luma Duma."

That totally made me cheesy smile. Oh gee what happened to Jae. Oh my gosh. Kay, please update soon. Anticipation and biting nails [not literally].

I really enjoyed reading. :]
18th-Jul-2007 04:28 pm (UTC)
Really? Thanks, I tired to finish it before my mom told me to sleep. It was 12 when I finished writing it.

thank you veyr much for your long comment and for reading ^^
18th-Jul-2007 12:55 am (UTC)
aah..what happened??

and also "Mr. Kima Chuma Luma Duma." the.best.name.ever.!
18th-Jul-2007 04:29 pm (UTC)
Lol, I made that up on the spot. It just randomly popped up into my head.

HOpe you enjoyed readin ^^ and thank you =)
18th-Jul-2007 02:15 am (UTC)
Yoochun is so mean to say that about Micky and Minnie. T_T

Aww poor Jaejoong but he is so cute. Mr. Kim Luma Duma something. LOL.
18th-Jul-2007 04:30 pm (UTC)
Lol, yoochun so clueless ^^.

*points to your username* its ODDLY familiar. are you from asianfanatics?

I'm glad you found the name funny ^^ Thank you for reading!
18th-Jul-2007 03:14 am (UTC)
AAAHHHHHH!!! this was WONDERFUL!! i'm like crying because i want more so badly. and you left nice pictures that i couldn't find of JaeJoong's eyes. they are so cool! i feel really close to him because i have blue grey eyes.... IT'S CLOSE ENOUGH!! (they aren't anywhere as amazing *sigh*) well. i really have to know what is going to happen to Jae!! oh my good golly gosh!!! well he get amnesia?!?!? i read a comment on that and... it hadn't even crossed my mind! and Yunho will know about the love, but then... Jae will forget! when is Yunho going to find out that Jae wasn't there because of an accident, or was it!?!?!?!??!!?!?!?!?!? OH MY GOOD GOLLY GOSH!! DID SOMEONE HURT JAE!!! they will get their ass whipped by... every member!!! i think that the Minnie and Micky thing is super cute ^_~ ... this is long... sorry, i'm used to writing super long review/comment things!! just know that every word i put in here means that i love the story that much more!!! *runs in circles waiting for the next part*
18th-Jul-2007 04:32 pm (UTC)
Wow. This the longest comment I've ever received!! thank you!! Gamsahabnida!! You don't know how much this means to me^^ I'm glad you really enjoyed this chapter. I hope you'll find it more exciting next chapter. Nah, Jaejoong won't forget, I find that amnesia thing a little over used so I don't include it. I hope you like chapter 3 =)

Thank you for reading once again ^^
18th-Jul-2007 05:08 am (UTC)
Oh no!! Poor Jae! I wonder what happened to him?! As for Yoochun...gosh! He was so mean to what Minnie told him...hmm..hopefully Chanmgin can get him back for that by making him jealous or something...This is really good! Can't wait until your next update! :)
18th-Jul-2007 04:34 pm (UTC)
Lol, Be prepare to feel bad for Jae in the future chapters =( he's going to go through a lot of depression =/

Ha Yoochun IS very mean. He isn't going to get close to changmin anytime soon though so don't be expecting too much.

Thank you for reading!!
18th-Jul-2007 09:32 am (UTC)
zomfg XDDDD his eyes *drools over them* They ARE superduper gorgeous!

rofl@ Changmin..maahaha.. now Iwanna steal his I-pod XDDDDd kgnchhhh XD *huggles the min for having been indirectly turned down *cough**

NOOOOOO JAEJOONG IN THE HOSPITAAAAAL >.< Something with his eyes? I_I

<3 you'd better update soon..or else..muahahaa
18th-Jul-2007 04:35 pm (UTC)
*drools with you* Yes, Jaejoong has the most gorgeous eyes ever. He should do a contact lense commercial!! *gets excited*

LOl, I've like to take a look at changmin's ipod too. *evil laughter*

Thank you for reading!!
18th-Jul-2007 10:13 pm (UTC)
No no no....
Jae got an accident??
Oooh..
Yunnie got the letter...
I wonder what's in the letter...

Please update!! ^^
Can't wait to read the next part!! ^___^
20th-Jul-2007 03:16 pm (UTC)
Thankies for reading ^^ I was too lazy to include the letter *apologies* lol I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^
27th-Jul-2007 01:34 pm (UTC)
Mr. Kima Luma Chuma Duma.....hAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I bet the florist never set up the flowers. XDDDD.

^-^
28th-Jul-2007 02:54 am (UTC)
LMAO. I just wrote whatever popped up. >.<

Thanks for reading!
19th-Aug-2007 10:09 pm (UTC)
omg it suddenly got so dramatic when changmin dropped the ipod so i got all scared like, "oh noes! what will happen on this sorrowful autumn evening?" and then jaejoong like DIES so i go "OH NOES!" D:

and then i scroll down and you're comment is like "oh, i just want to make yunho feel guilty..." -_-; (i feel so... minmang.....)
21st-Aug-2007 03:19 pm (UTC)
LOL. Agreed, this chapter was super dramatic. Jaejoong's not THAT badly hurt though so no worries ^^

LOL. Yunho deserves to feel Guilty though >.<

Thanks for reading!
2nd-Sep-2007 05:25 pm (UTC) - the suspense... the unexpectedness!!
Oh shit! Why is everything going wrong for Jaejoong!

That was brilliant, by the way... about it being the day before April Fools. Muahahhaha!

Changmin! LOVE! My dearest Minnie in love --how sweet it is. Tho sad.
22nd-Sep-2007 02:04 pm (UTC) - Re: the suspense... the unexpectedness!!
Well.. the plot thickens mwhahaha

Thankies, I only thought of that while typing, it was completely different when I was thinking of it though >.<

Changminnie's adorable >.< Thanks for reading!
17th-Nov-2007 05:00 pm (UTC)
ohh jaejong got into accident!!!

"DUCK BUTT!! Pay up! I told you I could get Changmin's poptart without him beating me up!"
haha funny
17th-Nov-2007 05:21 pm (UTC)
Poor Joongie =(

Lol. Yoochun's so blunt >.<

Thanks for reading!
30th-May-2008 03:28 am (UTC)
micky and minnie, a couple...that's right!

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