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16th-Jul-2007 09:16 pm
TITLE: Behind The Gray Eyes
LENGHT: Series [1/?]
AUTHOR: Dora[[info]sweetbait]
RATING: PG 13
PAIRINGS: Jaeho, Yoomin, Jaeki (eventual Jaeho)
GENRE: Romance, drama, angst, not sure yet
SUMMARY: Jaejoong makes yunho realize that there's something special between them Yunho's too stubborn to let his pride down and accept Jae.
OTHERS: This is my first fanfic so if I make any mistakes, please tell me ^^. I'm just testing the waters with this chapter so please tell me what you think ^^


Jaejoong stared at the piece of paper in front of him. Written neatly on the first line with the most elegant cursive known to mankind were the words, "Dear Yunho". Twirling the pink pen around his long fingers, Jaejoong sighed and tucked the sheet into the drawer. This is his fourth attempt this week to write the perfect letter to confess his feelings. This is also the fourth time he put the sheet away with only two words on it after spending the whole evening thinking.

Jaejoong banged his head on the table as is doing so will make the letter write itself.

"Jaejoong-ah..," Yunho peeked through the door , "is everything alright?"

Jaejoong wiped his head around to the source of the voice. Realizing it was Yuho, he quickly turned around to check f the letter is hidden before turing back to yunho.

"Everything's fine." The older boy stood up. "I just remembered that I left something at the SM building"

"Is that it?" Yunho advanced towards Jaejoong, "We can always get it tomorrow. There's a celebrity function thing anyways. What did you leave?"

"Um.. Its that hat you bought me last year at...at..a." He bit his lips and ended his sentence. Jaejoong would have loved to continue if it yunho's big eyes weren't only two inches away from him. The sudden closeness of Yunho made Jaejoong lightheaded. Jaejoong closed his eyes wondering if Yunho was about to kiss him. His moment of anticipation was short-lived and Yunho forced his eyes open.

"Jaejoong-ah! Are you wearing contacts?!" Yunho kept his fingers on Jaejoong's eyelids.

"wh-what?" Disappointment spread through Jaejoong. Yunho was completely oblivious of his feelings.

"Your eyes are gray! Were they always gray?" Yunho shortened the distance between their eyes.

"Um..yeah...  .Ahh.. Yunho!! Let go! They're starting to sting!!" Jaejoong pushed yunho away and began to rub furiously at his eyes. To be honest, his eyes were just an excuse to let him turn away before yunho see's his blushing face.

"Sorry! Jaejoong, your eyes are really pretty. I never noticed"

"You never do..." Jaejoong muttered looking down at his pink socks.

"Hmm? What did you say?"

"Nothing," Jaejoong looked up and faked a smile." Yunnie-ah, are you hungry? I'll make you cake!"

Before Yunho could say anything about just having dinner, Jaejoong skipped to the kitchen and took out two eggs. Yunho smiled at the sight. Jaejoong was too cute for his own good.

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The Dong Bang household consist of 1 bedroom. Yup. One tiny little bedroom for five tall (not to mention HOT as well) guys (3 of 5 exceeding 6 feet). It is an understatement to say that it is difficult to have a conversation in the middle of the night without have other member attack you with pillows. It doesn't take a genius to figure that out.

Kim Jaejoong dragged out the youngest, Shim Changmin out of the room in the middle of the night.

"Jae..what the hell. Its 3am. Can't you wait till morning to talk to me?"Changmin rubbed his eyes.

"NO. listen-

"Hyung, we have a photoshoot at 7am, I need to sleep.."

"Changmin! Listen for a second! Unless.... you want me to tell yoochun you have naked pictures of him in your ipod..."

*silence*

"How'd you know?"

"so you do?" Jaejoong smirked.

"Fuck."

"Anyways, I need you to do me a favor" Jae looked up to see Changmin's reaction before continuing, "I need you to help me write a loveletter."

"And whats in it for me?"

"I'll buy you a month subscription to that porn site you visit everyday...and I'l teach you how to make strawberry cakes."

"Why would I want to know how to make strawberry cakes?"

"Yoochun loves strawberry cakes."

"So to whom is the letter for?"

Jaejoong whispered into the younger's ears.
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Yunho took at step back from the door. His left cheeks stung from leaning on the door too long. Why didn't Jaejoong tell him about liking someone?


END OF CHAPTER 1

DONE!! hehe. my first fanfic *proud* please tell me what you think. If its not good, then I'll just try another. I know its not that long but I'm new at this so I doubt many things. please comment ^^
Comments 
16th-Jul-2007 03:14 pm (UTC)
o.o yunho jealous tinkin tt jj lyks sum1 else?haha
17th-Jul-2007 01:01 pm (UTC)
He 's a bit jealous at th "someone" that Jae likes and he's also jealous that Jae told Changmin and not him.

Thanks for reading!!! You don't know how much this means for me ^^
16th-Jul-2007 03:26 pm (UTC)
Heehee...this is cute so far. XD

I love the JaeMin conspiring tandem here. And dense!jealous!Yunho. XD And of course dirty!Min...:9

Please update soon!
17th-Jul-2007 01:02 pm (UTC)
^^ Everyone loves the dense, jealous, and stubborn yunho >.< hehe

Thakn you for reading!!
16th-Jul-2007 04:53 pm (UTC)
Hee--Yunho, don't you know that eavesdropping leads to confusion and heartbreak? *points to about 5,000 fanfics, 400 books, and episodes of 300 dramas*
16th-Jul-2007 07:14 pm (UTC)
totally random..but i'm in love with your icon!!
16th-Jul-2007 07:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It was fun to make ^^
17th-Jul-2007 01:04 pm (UTC)
Hehe the confsions are so repetitive but there isn't a good fanfic without it ^^ *points to the 5000 fanfics too* lol

Thank you for reading!!!
17th-Jul-2007 03:12 pm (UTC)
Whee~ ^^
16th-Jul-2007 05:33 pm (UTC)
Yunho eavesdropping!!! bad manner!!

and Jaejoong..so cute with his pink socks and pink pen!
17th-Jul-2007 01:05 pm (UTC)
Lol. I was going to pair Jaejoong up with teletubbies socks but then decided to reserve that for junsu >.<

Thank you very much for reading!!
16th-Jul-2007 05:50 pm (UTC)
Oh very good! I really liked this start! Cant' wait to see what Yunho will do! Oh you are using my 2 favorite pairings of all! JaeHo and YooMin are LOVE!!!!!
17th-Jul-2007 01:06 pm (UTC)
My two favourite pairings are Jaeho and yoomin too ^^. I decided to pair changmin with yoochun since I got tired of seeing changmin paired up with food. lmao

Thank you for reading!
16th-Jul-2007 06:06 pm (UTC)
Oh that is a cute chappie, Yoomin I mean. Changmin has porn pictures of Yoochun. LMAO!!!! I love Yoomin so thanks for writing about them. :D
17th-Jul-2007 01:08 pm (UTC)
You're welcome. I love yoomin too. Its harder to find yoomin fanfics now since everyone support yoosu >.<

Thanks for reading1
16th-Jul-2007 07:17 pm (UTC)
jae with grey eyes is the prettiest thing ever! (except for junki, for I am a bigger junkifan)

and i would really like to know what they have in their ipods in real life XDD
17th-Jul-2007 01:11 pm (UTC)
My friend pointed out last week that Jae had grey eyes. so I decided to include that in the fic since I've neve noticed that before. I'm a big fan of junki too (although not as big as jaejoong ^^). He'll appear the a few chapters :)

Maybe I should include a bonus chapter later on about the member's ipods >.<

Anyways, thank you for reading!
16th-Jul-2007 09:34 pm (UTC)
Kakakakkaka....
Jae smart in trapping Minnie.. ^^

Oooohhh..
Yunnie thought Jae like other person...
Fufufufufufuuf...

Can't wait to read the next part!!! ^___^
17th-Jul-2007 01:12 pm (UTC)
hehe, I love the devious jae ^^

Thank you for reading. I'm sure you'll like the next part =)
16th-Jul-2007 10:20 pm (UTC)
ooooh!!! awesome! Jae got Changmin! that's funny. naked pictures... and Micky didn't notice? i now must go look for lots of pictures with Jae's grey eyes!! YAY! post more!
17th-Jul-2007 01:13 pm (UTC)
Jae and his gorgeous grey eyes...*starts drooling*

*wipes drool* Oh Micky doesn't know a thing about Changmin's obsession with naked yoochun....yet

Thank you for reading!!
16th-Jul-2007 11:10 pm (UTC)
Oh my god. Exciting. :]
I can't wait to read more from you.
17th-Jul-2007 01:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading! I'm glad that you liked it =)
16th-Jul-2007 11:17 pm (UTC)

"How'd you know?"

"so you do?" Jaejoong smirked.


Oh, jaejae...Tricky tricky!

17th-Jul-2007 01:34 pm (UTC)
lol, innocent changmin ^^ *coughs*

You can look forward to more scenarios like that ^^

Thanks for reading!
27th-Jul-2007 01:27 pm (UTC)
strawberry cakes for yoochun.^-^ BTW, I never had a strawberry cake , now that I think about it. Damn, now I am hungry :)
First fanfic ? Really Great .
28th-Jul-2007 02:53 am (UTC)
I've never had a strawberry cake either. >.<I've seen one though, they're really...pink lol Thanks, I guess its pretty good for a first ^^ Thanks for reading!
7th-Aug-2007 12:23 pm (UTC)
erm...
sorry it is maybe a bit late for me to say this...
a good starting...
;)
7th-Aug-2007 01:11 pm (UTC)
Its never too late ^^ Thankies ^^ I thought it was a good starting too

Thanks for reading!
14th-Aug-2007 02:26 am (UTC)
too cute!! a few typos that confused me but very good.
20th-Aug-2007 01:40 pm (UTC)
Thanks, And I'll be sure to reread it so I could fix those typos ^^

Thanks for reading!
19th-Aug-2007 09:56 pm (UTC)
omg jaejoong is like so cute in here... lol at the naked ipod picture thing. xD
20th-Aug-2007 01:41 pm (UTC)
LOL. Jaejoong adorable >.< Changmin's perverted, lol

Thanks for reading!
2nd-Sep-2007 05:07 pm (UTC) - excellentness!
Man this is great... Min gets to be the confidant!!! EEEE~~~~
22nd-Sep-2007 02:02 pm (UTC) - Re: excellentness!
LOL ^^ Minnie's quite the confident boy ^^ lets hope it stays that way, lol

Thanks for reading!
17th-Nov-2007 04:51 pm (UTC)
haha yoomin
17th-Nov-2007 05:21 pm (UTC)
yupyup ^_^ ♥

Thanks for reading!
30th-May-2008 03:21 am (UTC)
omg i'm hooked! i like both pairings...yoomin first then yunjae
18th-May-2009 06:07 pm (UTC)
interesting!!

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